My main character is visually impaired and something really bad as going on at her house. It's dark out and her guide dog and her are sitting on the sidewalk. She's really upset. The prince is going to be walking by, now I need your help. What do you think he should say to her. I need a really cute and romantic conversation. They will eventually fall in love and they need a sweet memory about the first time the yet. Any suggestions would be great, take it as far as you'd look. Any.other suggestions you thin I should add to the book would be most helpful. Plus.leve your name, because.if I like your ideas than I'll thank you in the book. ;)
What is the first thing a prince would say?
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- 3+ months ago by Writer of...
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- dog, prince, character
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You are the writer, so we just have to wait and see what you do. I suggest that you are not ready to be writing stories.
"her guide dog and her are sitting" -- "she and her guide dog are sitting"
"The prince is going to be walking by, now I need your help." -- comma splice
"What do you think he should say to her." -- Improper punctuation
"the first time the yet." -- Misspelling
"Any suggestions would be great, take it" -- comma splice
"as far as you'd look." -- like, not look
"Any.other suggestions" -- extraneous punctuation
"you thin" -- misspelling
"Plus.leve" -- extraneous punctuation and misspelling
"because.if" -- extraneous punctuation
You need to read novels. Lots of novels. Any novels. Notice that they all have perfect spelling, perfect punctuation, perfect composition. Notice where they use one space and where they use two. Notice that every speaker in a dialog gets a new paragraph, and every paragraph is preceded by a blank line. Notice any writing techniques or figures of speech. Take notes so you know where you found what you know. It takes a lot of reading to be a writer.
I am supportive. I gave you some very good advice that would take you a lifetime to learn on your own. If you want to be a writer, you have to be very good at it to be acceptable at all. So lose your petulant attitude and start learning the business.
That wasn't very nice. I asked for your ideas for my book, not to criticize my spelling, punctuation and sentence structure. I'd i say that this question was going in the book, no. I'm not going to spend hours on my question, making sure that it looks perfect. I know it is hard becoming a writer, but you could be supportive about it.