You are 14(age) asleep in bed. You wake up in the middle of the night. The wind blowing your curtains disturbs you. So you get up to close it. You hear a scream a gun shooting but your curiosity is piqued and it wins over your fear. You go to the window to peek outside and close it but as soon as you get there a man comes in through your window points a gun at you and tells you not to speak. You freeze. You don't know what to do. He scares you. You are literally sweating out of fear. He warns you not to say a word about him to anyone. You nod. He touches you with the end of his gun which is still warm. You close your eyes scrunch them shut and the next minute you open them he is gone. Dad's capboard door is open and swinging, there are some spread documents on the floor and the man is jumping out of the window, i run toward the window to see where he goes, i see him turn left and a moment after that a blue van coming from the right and hear the tires screech as it disappeares on the left. Since then nothing is the same. The woman next door seems to have disappeared. Dad is a banker or what it seems like and mom was gone to visit grand parents, mom wont be home for a month and dad is oversees in a swiss bank, in reality dad is an mi6 agent, and this has something to do with one of his mission.Dads friend mike is also an agent keeping an eye on our home, after a week i get info that dad had died in a road accident and then is when mike decides that its time that i know the reality, i dont talk about what had happened the night earlier but i try to relate it with my dads reality.
Want to write a story, but I'm afraid my English isn't so good, and I can't figure out what words to
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You need to read novels. Lots of novels. Any novels. Notice that they all have perfect spelling, perfect punctuation, perfect composition. Notice where they use one space and where they use two. Notice that every speaker in a dialog gets a new paragraph, and every paragraph is preceded by a blank line. Notice any writing techniques or figures of speech. Take notes so you know where you found what you know. It takes a lot of reading to be a writer.