In my spare time, I sometimes write raps. I wanna see what you people think of my lyrics... Thanks for reading!
When the last girl moved away, I thought that I was out of cupid's range,
That he couldn't track me any longer, that he finally lost my trail,
But when the vacation ended, that's when I found myself starin' at you,
And it wasn't long before I realized the god of love was on my tail.
The manhunt resumed, the chase back on,
And I wonder if I can avoid him for long.
He's flanking me wherever I turn, pushing me to you, gotta be strong.
See, his arrows got a lock on me, the same way my eyes are locked on you,
Should I go through with it or surrender to,
The superior artillery and cupid's moves?
I managed to dodge a few of his shots,
But I can't return fire, just run or get caught.
Pursued by a baby, bad for my morale,
So should I give in and fall for this gal?
Thanks, man. Honestly, I wasn't expecting that kind of good feedback. It's nice to see that you enjoyed my work. I've noticed that I find it easier to write a rap if it's about me or things in my life. The words simply fly into my head if I'm rapping about something I know is real in my life. This one for example is what I've experienced a few months back. I had absolutely no plans of going through young love feelings again after what happened before because I didn't want to mess up again. I also thought I'd add the cupid thing for a little humor in my writing.