The narrative was worth 4 points and she gave me a 2 because in the story all it said was “the stepmom, the stepsisters” so when i added three more paragraphs I gave the stepmom and stepdaughter a name. I’m trying to see how is that wrong?
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We don't know:
What the teacher was asking for or looking for
What your story said
What the ultimate learning goal of the assignment was
Suggest you ask the teacher who has all those answers and because we are a question/answer site that does not have a clue what the teacher wants. Our crystal ball rolled off the table and broke yesterday.