I Need help urgent in writing a small story?

Okay, here goes:
The converts were indignant because the cynical tribe had caused them humiliation by mocking the converts for expressing their fervor by glowering in their rebuke to the small boy, despite the fact that the boy heeded the converts' words concerning the matter of the skewer after the well meant lecture.
It's not very good and not a (short) story; sorry. It also does not contain the word blondered because I wasn't sure whether or not you meant blundered. I strongly urge you to add details and make it your own.