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The story is about A rich man named Alex Forley who was killed by a gun and Detective Inspector Rod Eliot was trying to find out if it was a murder and if so who was the murder.

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The story is about a rich man named Alex Forley, one day, he was shot dead. A detective, named Rod Eliot made an attempt to uncover the case and find out if he was murdered. If so, who was the murderer?

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The story is about a rich man, named Alex Forley, who was shot and killed. Detective, and inspector, Rod Eliot, was investigating if it was a murder, and if so, who was the murderer.

I dont know English well, can u help me to fix sentence?

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