The sentence is:
"He smiled, making his way towards a black Range Rover. He took out a pair of keys, unlocking the doors. He opened the door for me, then shutting it behind me."
I want it more descriptive, there should be tension between them, but it doesn't seem to phase him.
How can I word this better?
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- 3+ months ago by lindseyta...
- Topics:
- black, door, key, pair, writing, range, rover, sentence, word
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