Hello! I have to describe an ad for my writing class. English is not my first language so I would highly appreciate some feedback and corrections. :(
Thank you!
The ad will start with a medium shot of Beyonce wearing an Ivy Parker sweater, with her narration of personal challenges in the background. Followed by a close-up shot of the ordinary women with voice over narration of their struggles in life continued by Gigi and Karlie. Upbeat hip-hop music will start playing transition shots of the celebrities and ordinary woman doing different workouts (jumping rope, battle ropes, push-ups). The ad will be filed at a warehouse gym.
The camera cuts to a full-shot of all of them posing together with a written on-screen text that says “Feel empowered” as it cuts to a pitch black shot with the logo on it.