Hello everyone! I'm a student (age 23), this is my first ever poem. Please comment and rate, suggest corrections, thank you so much in advance!

Don't ever panic, don't procrastinate
Don't stop working, coz i'ts never too late..

Life is short, it's a lie, sure it's hard
Don't surrender, just have a big strong heart

Till the moment you die, just stay alive
Always prepare for the worst in life

Your time is precious, make the most of it
Avoid all evil as it's not worth it

Hardships will always gonna knock you down
Rise up, just don't lie flat on the ground

You know it's not poetry, it leads me to my goal
A small dream in my words, it just depicts my soul..