"moved" it is a feeling felt by everyone in this world. this kind of feeling comes only when you experience an incident with someone or something. about me, as far as i know my mother has moved me so deeply and i guess most of the people are moved by their mother too. but it always doesn't have to be mother to move you. it can be your loved one your friends or may be even a stranger.
it was a fine day in my school and my friends were planning to go for a trip for two days in Shanghai. i was very excited when i heard about the plan and i made up my mind to go to that trip what ever it takes. when i returned home i didnt mind asking mom about our plan because i was sure i will get rejected. so that night i ran out of house and went to the trip. for two days i was travelling and enjoying and didn't even think about my mom. when i returned home my mom was lying in the bed with her eyes full of tears. i thought i will get badly scolded or beaten but what happened at that moment moved me. she stood up and came close to me and hugged me so tight and then cried on my shoulders. "i love you son, don't ever do that again" mom said. after hearing those words i was so sad and tears were flowing through my eyes. i said "i am sorry for what ever i did and i will never do that again. please forgive me." that was the day i was seriously moved by someone which i will never forget in my life.
Can any one correct my essay? my english is not good enough. so I cannot correct it by myself.?
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